Hand writing

This is my term 2 handwriting sample. My next goal is to form my letters correctly and watch the size of my letters.

I can type words 6 per minute.

Maori

I learnt the maori names for the sea animals.

Swimming

Autumn Cameo

Written Language Sample

Cameo

Learning Intention: I am learning how to use appropriate adjectives and powerful verbs in my cameo writing.

Success Criteria: I am able to find and highlight adjectives and verbs in a cameo and explain why they work.

I am able to write sentences with appropriate adjectives and powerful verbs in my cameo.

Task:  To write a poem about autumn, using appropriate adjectives and powerful verbs.

Remember to:  Punctuate your work correctly.

        Use careful spelling and sounding out

Autumn - DRAFT

Autumn changes the colour of the levas. An the leas start to crach an fo off the trees.  An the levas change ongre an yellow an red. the levas fowl down to the ground sole an caful.

AUTUMN - Published

Autumn changes the colour of the leaves.  The leaves start to change and fall off the trees.  The leaves change to orange, yellow and red. The leaves flow down to the ground slowly and carefully.
By Terei

Volcano Erupting

Here is my moment in time writing about the volcano erupting. We made it in our sandpit.

Bang bang! Flames of rock shoot like missiles into the air. Clouds of steam and ash making the view invisible. Lava bursts out and spreads everywhere. Red hot lava takes over the land and destroys everything in its path. Slowly the lava cools and turns into rock.  

Te Ahuahu walk

"Yes! The bus is here,” I yelled. The whole school got on the bus. I sat by Rocky. The bus was nearly ready. Vroom Vroom! The bus took off. When we got there the school lined up. We climbed the mountain. I was surprised. 40 minutes later... I was so hot. Hone was talking about the Maori. I saw lots of things from the top. I saw the lake. Lunchtime. I ate my lunch.  Then we raced back down the hill.  2 minutes later the bus arrived.