Name: Terei
Explanation Writing - Term 4
Prompt: - - Write to describe one environmental problem and explain what people do to reduce its impact on the planet.
Think about:
- What your reader needs to know about the topic
- How you are going to introduce the topic
- The order of your ideas and how you link them
- What to include in your summary
Remember to:
- Choose your words carefully
- Take care with your spelling, punctuation, and sentences
- Edit - add or delete words or sentences to improve your work
Start Writing Here:
Hello Today I’m writing about a environmental problem and write 3 ways to reduce the planet, my one is about pollution we are just throwing our garbage everywhere like on the streets and in forests and oceans.
Firstly, I don’t know why people are doing this but I know what we can do to solve this one, we could always recycle the trash and maybe make new things out of it. Plus we don’t want animals eating our junk they wouldn’t be available to… sorry reader, to poo it out.
Secondly, We could always burn the pollution so the animals won’t die quickly. Burning the stuff could be good because come on we can’t always be good right? But as you think about it we still could be polluting in the sky because of the smoke.
Finally, we don’t like people who drop trash on earth like plastic bags, chip bags, cans and other things. So why don’t we just pick up our trash instead of dropping it.
Conclusion, Hello people thank you reading my Explanation writing I hope you all like how I could reduce the planet. Like recycle trash like at my school Ohaeawai primary, Also maybe burn our trash and pick up after yourselves so earth won’t be a trash ball.
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