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Thursday, April 14, 2016

Autumn Cameo

Written Language Sample
Cameo
Learning Intention: I am learning how to use appropriate adjectives and powerful verbs in my cameo writing.

Success Criteria: I am able to find and highlight adjectives and verbs in a cameo and explain why they work.
I am able to write sentences with appropriate adjectives and powerful verbs in my cameo.

Task:  To write a poem about autumn, using appropriate adjectives and powerful verbs.

Remember to:  Punctuate your work correctly.
        Use careful spelling and sounding out

Autumn - DRAFT

Autumn changes the colour of the levas. An the leas start to crach an fo off the trees.  An the levas change ongre an yellow an red. the levas fowl down to the ground sole an caful.


AUTUMN - Published
Autumn changes the colour of the leaves.  The leaves start to change and fall off the trees.  The leaves change to orange, yellow and red. The leaves flow down to the ground slowly and carefully.
By Terei
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