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Friday, June 24, 2016

Partly Cloudy - Writing

We watched a short video called Partly Cloudy. We had to write sentences using adverbs as sentence starters.

Partly Cloudy
Happily the bird gave the cats and dogs baby animals.
Smoothly the bird flew through the clouds and the clouds were moving like heads.
Happily the clouds were giant and they made baby animals out of clouds.
Carefully they made the baby animals but there was a cloud that was unhappy.
Crazily the baby crocodile bit the cloud’s finger.
Quickly the bird got dizzy, he can’t fill his tummy.
Happily the bird looked up at the other cloud and the puppy was playing with the cloud.
Speedily the porcupine ripped the bag from the outside.
Sadly the bird saw the shank and the bird flew away to the other cloud.
Madly the cloud was glaring at the bird and the cloud was crying.
Happily the bird came back with armour and the cloud made an eel and shot lightning at the bird.


I am good at adverbs at the start of my sentences

I need to work on making sure my sentences make sense.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Terei I really like how you have written enough writing for a year 4.I wish I could be amazing like you are.

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