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Friday, May 26, 2017

Shared writing

We have been writing hooks about pictures with buddies. My buddies are Kate and Waiorere. Here is the first picture we wrote about.

Nitro Circus.jpgEpic stunts. They flipped like dolphins. The fireworks shot up into the air like an explosion. The crowd screamed wildly like a bunch of apes. The motor bikes raced into the air like soaring eagles. The motor bikes flew so high that they almost touched the ceiling. The pumped up motor bikes then stomped on the ramp like a speeding giant.

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